ReubenH

Based on a true story.
This is a test page for my web comic :> (I’ll probably post the next page to this one later…) The two characters are also the ones from my previous posts: Fix (the girl) Kick-start (the guy)
Tiny bit of background so you can get the gist of what’s happening here: Both characters are currently running away from some gang people they ran into in a building and they made/are making their way down the fire escape to get away.
I would very much enjoy feedback on this, because this is my very first time trying to make a comic page that is not a strip. Let me know things that work and don’t work, from readability to perspective to anatomy to pretty much anything!
Thanks!
PS: If I do get feedback to change and/or try different things I will upload an updated version to see if you think it works better or not :0

This is a test page for my web comic :> (I’ll probably post the next page to this one later…) The two characters are also the ones from my previous posts: Fix (the girl) Kick-start (the guy)

Tiny bit of background so you can get the gist of what’s happening here: Both characters are currently running away from some gang people they ran into in a building and they made/are making their way down the fire escape to get away.

I would very much enjoy feedback on this, because this is my very first time trying to make a comic page that is not a strip. Let me know things that work and don’t work, from readability to perspective to anatomy to pretty much anything!

Thanks!


PS: If I do get feedback to change and/or try different things I will upload an updated version to see if you think it works better or not :0

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